Saturday, June 14, 2014

Forty Minutes At A Station Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forty minutes at a station
Lasting an eternity
As I waited in anticipation
You a beautiful vision
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Rachel Adams
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Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

This is such a great poem! Perfectly describes how we can build something up to such epic proportions in our mind and be so completely baffled when reality gives us a kick. You closed this piece so perfectly with those last two stanzas! Adding to my favorites just for how perfectly this poem is written!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 June 2014

A beautifully woven poem this is! Brilliant! 'Forty minutes at a station A lifetime of an education' - Liked it very much!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 14 June 2014

Impressive! Very very good! keep on writing, Rachel.

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Vijay Sai R 14 June 2014

a lovely tale of love in fort minutes

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