Monday, February 26, 2018

Fortune Comments

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Industrious persons are successful ever
No one can blame them in labour
Dutiful persons make their own fortune
Indeed they make their countries wealthy
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 16 November 2018

This is indeed a good tribute to our country as a cute short poem....very inspiring acrostic....thank you Kumar.. thanks for all your comments on my poems too

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 March 2018

Clever acrostic Kumarmani. When one works hard there is bound to be rewards, either monetory or increased satisfaction of a job well done. Being industrious or creative gives a sense of purpose and well being which surely rubs off on people we meet or live with.

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Unwritten Soul 28 February 2018

I wish the best for INDIA :) and have a good fortune everyone there. A hopeful acrostic and i like it!

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 February 2018

A great acrostic poem with a message of hope and prosperity.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 February 2018

Dutiful persons make their own fortune. Great thoughts.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 27 February 2018

Loved the Acrostic form... Last line is little deceiving. Nice Work!

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Paul Brookes 27 February 2018

Indeed very true but sometimes it is good to remember it is the humble worker who make the riches Great write interesting thoughts

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 February 2018

A good account of India in acrostic format. Administration in India has always been a puzzle for me.

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Rini Shibu 26 February 2018

Great poem about fortune and th country India

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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