Wednesday, August 15, 2018

Fortunate Without Comments

Rating: 5.0

If all I'd have were parents that others had
That have them a foundation upon which they stand
And gave them the counsel that is the compass they needed
And stood beside them when they needed to be held
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Michael Eziudo
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Susan Williams 15 August 2018

I really like how you structured this poem and the emotions behind these well-chosen words. Excellent poem. Quite deserving of a 10 and a place on my favs.10+++

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Benin City, Nigeria
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