Thursday, June 15, 2006

Fortunata Saves The Day Comments

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That year you were airborne.
Like a sheet of loose-leaf paper
you ascended, tumbled, dipped—
intricate as an origami dove,
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Sonny Rainshine
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Esther Leclerc 15 June 2006

Oh, sweet and fickle fate.......... So glad that most often, we make our own. An exquisite write, Sonny. Thank you.

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Sandra Erickson 15 June 2006

I love this poem-wonderful, wonderful! How many pages, indeed..... Cranes a thousand and one verses, our golden hearts poured out across white paper; lips pursed, and bitten, eyes narrowed in concentration, children's fingers fold and refold, believe in the peace and good fortune at the end of the quest; I work in silence, watch as disappointment approaches one fragile feather at a time. 6/21/02 Thanks. Sandra

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Michael Emine 15 June 2006

Do you enjoy flying paper planes (or helicopters) ?

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