Wednesday, June 7, 2023

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Rating: 5.0

I can't understand why I continue to suffer
My heart is depleted from years of mourning
But I remain sorrowful
I guess it's the Catholic in me
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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M.J. Lemon 10 June 2023

A truly powerful verse, LeeAnn. This goes to myfavourites.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 June 2023

G-d would extend his hands around your sincere heart definitely.

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Ruta Mohapatra 08 June 2023

You are right, LeeAnn, loneliness is hard to bear...

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S H 08 June 2023

You are at least with Ghost. Nice poem. Full ****

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

God is merciful and listens to us, you will get your companion soon Cheer. Full Stars.

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Very very true, LeeAnn. Loneliness gnaws at your very being… awesome poetry.5*

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Nosheen Irfan 08 June 2023

Coming straight from the heart and going straight to the heart of the reader. Straight forward and honest. Bravo! Full marks!

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David Wood 07 June 2023

Very heartfelt words LeeAnn but your canine loves you and you love him, and sometimes that takes the pain of loneliness away.

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Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

Painful and pathetic - you said it about loneliness - Perfect poem *****

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Rajan T Renganathan 07 June 2023

Loneliness creates fortress around and we feel trapped in it. Brilliant poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

We all with some purpose here, may be you are here to explore loneliness and write about it as you are doing. Nice poem LeeAnn, look around you will see all beautiful things.

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Anjandev Roy 07 June 2023

Simply brilliant..... thanks for sharing this poem with us....

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 June 2023

Heartfelt words LeeAnn x Top marks *****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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