Fortnight To Paradise Comments

Beautiful days quickly pass leaving behind sweet memories.

not many read it so I modified it a bit only is it a premonition i wonder 14 days end in a few days two or three only will we here be let's see

Sometimes I feel this very world can be a paradise if we treated it and each other better. 'The body is just an organ a means of transportation some say it houses a soul I am not quite fully whole I wonder' I loved these lines. A wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing: -)

Vision which carries constancy and imagery is is rich in conscience and brilliant poetic expression. Sometimes we wonder for paradise. An amazing sharing is done here...10