Fortnight To Paradise Poem by me poet yeps poet

Fortnight To Paradise

Rating: 3.8


Imagery and constancy
are two leading visionaries
wait, watch and see
what happens next

The body is just an organ
a means of transportation
some say it houses a soul
I am not quite fully whole

I wonder
what the medicals need to say
is paradise really
just fourteen days away
let me wait as many days
having come over thirty years
this way
holding breath all my way

now may I also say
Paradise could be
just two weeks away
but who really can that say
I may not yet
you may
let's take a bet
Okay not yet....

Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: conscience,conservatism,imagery,paradise,poetic expression,souls
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 04 October 2018

Beautiful days quickly pass leaving behind sweet memories.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 July 2018

not many read it so I modified it a bit only is it a premonition i wonder 14 days end in a few days two or three only will we here be let's see

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Red Soul 04 July 2018

Sometimes I feel this very world can be a paradise if we treated it and each other better. 'The body is just an organ a means of transportation some say it houses a soul I am not quite fully whole I wonder' I loved these lines. A wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

Vision which carries constancy and imagery is is rich in conscience and brilliant poetic expression. Sometimes we wonder for paradise. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 July 2018

meharbani sir yours poetry comes to one when someone at least one adores and you do sir so I must bow

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