Monday, April 4, 2022

Fortitude Comments

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He went on a journey through the dark days of time;
the mountain of troubles became so hard to climb.
He kept on carrying the weight of the burden;
although the load on his shoulder brought him much pain.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Nabakishore Dash 05 April 2022

Excellent poem indicating the firmness and grit of reaching the target.

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soren Barrett 04 April 2022

Beautifully said, with picturesque wording and images.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 April 2022

Totally Brilliant It gave me hope Bravo!

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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