Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Forsaking My Love Comments

Rating: 4.6

I hate you
I wish to tear you away from me
This tumor that clings to my chest
The thing that makes me ache
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Michael Silver
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Rev Thepoet 29 April 2013

That's amazing. I like. perfectly worded

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Crystal Castro 19 April 2013

Ugh....woooow...i LOVE that....it's one thing when women always tell their feelings like this....a whole diff story to see a man say these words...considering what i have give thru

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Alaa Hussain 31 March 2013

Student Zombie does not succeed in the exam unless looking for pen _ Energy human limits tabbed by God if left her over whelmed and flipped up and that was right _ those who exploit religion badly shuld to understand and strive in debt and with calls to him and understand the difference between the two Even religion is not just an excuse as is the case today with some ignorant _ youth dreaming of spring not to enact bayonets, if not to save the murderer of the fate of disorientation and mass

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Brad Liggins 07 November 2012

This Poem is beautiful

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Alyssa Ellis 04 October 2012

very very good! ! ! ! Its nice to read something with so much truth and meaning!

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Mercy Oyesa Oluchina 19 September 2012

i love this poem, just how i would have said it.

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Rex Copperfield 23 July 2012

all i can say is Amen

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