Sunday, July 29, 2007

Forsaken Hope Comments

Rating: 3.9

Helpless she lies
In the street, cold and wet
Her hope for life dies
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Wandering Scarlet
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wow, i wish i was that gurl in this poem...

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Jona`e Levett 03 November 2007

i love this one. what was your insiration for thi poem? -leia

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wow...i really liked that one...reminds me of someone...a close friend of mine

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Evaughn Gray 01 August 2007

wow that was very painful.. i loved it..i give it a ten~hazel

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Anita Blake 01 August 2007

amazing write, enjoyed reading it. its so deep and moving.

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Cyrina Moon 29 July 2007

So true, her loss is devastating. Horrid hopelessness. The pervasive question resounds. WHY? ? ? Why a given person, why a given time. Well written. Cy

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