Tuesday, July 11, 2006

Forsaken Comments

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Broken torn split in two
not really knowing what to do
with your scent left in my bed
and my heart as heavy as led
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Carike Klokow
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Brian Dorn 11 July 2006

Carike, a powerful write... I especially liked the ending! Very well done! ! Brian

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