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'sleep was my first love'
and it meant a lot to me
it waited me so patiently
every time I walked out of the lobby
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very romantic verse indeed.......................
My bed is empty without sleep Cold nights are broken, silence forsaken my world Without my first love……….. sleep ........................ I just love this.I passionately love to sleep..Ha ha..If only I will get paid to sleep, what a wonderful world i might have..He he.. Love this, ganda.. Hugs and love♥ ♥ ♥ Meggie
Sounds very romantic... well crafted Lady Cartina...10points hehaha
sleep was my first love' ........................................ Catrina, it forces beautiful memoirs...10... best wishes, Tsira
Sleep walked with the thin clouds Touched me, caressed softly my mind So nicely written! ....I loved the way of expression...10+
A beautiful piece Catrina..your imagery is perfect...10++
Sleep - a tease of a lover at times though eh Catrina? - - beautiful imagery you chose with care here......10 and more from Fay
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7/31/2025 1:23:23 PM # 1.0.0
when hundred moons wiggled on my palms and billion of stars carol to my eyes Sleep walked with the thin clouds Touched me, caressed softly my mind From the nights I made him wait till dawn, I took him for granted and he lost his patience He escaped from the night’s wing i love sleep, if it comes like this....a beautiful poem for readers