Forsaken. Comments

very touchingly poeticised.

Very touching and heartfelt. May your prayer bring peace to both of you. Happy New Year. Blessings from, Sandra

whatever u write sweety seems as if it is directly coming out of ur heart. your usage of words simply extraordinary.

So emotional so touching...Great! 10+++keep writing dear..

a very touching poem abt love....

I salute your emotion! ! ! so touching...... 10+

A very sensitive piece of work!

This one is quite touching..congratulations and wish you lots of luck..i hope to see more poems coming from your side.

The moment you saw me I knew you were hooked. I knew by your sighs and by the way you looked. i was just for it... very good dear...keep it up...10 read mine miss i miis u..anywhere..love at first sight

cute 1! ! ! nice! .......................great goin! !

You are a good writer. I want you to be better. Suggestions only! i should be I, never the small leter. 'cause with me', would read smoother if said 'thinking with me'. At the end, your future does lay would read easier too. I want you to be encouraged with how good you are. I am not saying your writing is bad! It is very good, but I know it could be better. :) Just suggestions and keep up the good work. Deborah Cromer

Beautiful poem......Very Nice...

A heartfelt piece Siddharth - you have definitely captivated your reader with this great write 10

Your love So pure and pristine Like crystal waters That shine Flow from your heart So divine Scared I was of your feeling Did you think it that way? For me, it made more meaning That one so far away Could think that With him my future lay. Tis only pure blessings From your soul, And yes happiness, that I seek That you pray And part with I wish to take away lovely Siddharth I got carried away and wrote this. Ill give you an A+++ and 10+ anjali