Monday, June 1, 2009

Forsaken Comments

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You wreck my love and vacate my heart
Leave me solidifying into gold of dust
Snipping arrow from the back till the start
Make it painless to snivel till lust
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Amir Amzah
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Bhaswat Chakraborty 03 June 2009

Bang on! Indeed...It’s such.. a waste/A love that’s been given/for the sake of your lies! This poem has a very fresh style. Congratulations for being able to share it.

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Amir Amzah

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