Monday, October 19, 2020

Forsaken Comments

Rating: 5.0

How could the stars betray me?
To orchestrate love this way
A cruel cupid caper?
How can I ever mend
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Simone Harriman
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow this is one of your very best, so appealing, soulful and creative musing indeed. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

Yikes! ! ! " To orchestrate love this way" What " way" , i wonder? ? I guess NOT a good way. : ( this is food for thought! bri :) I'll read another.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 October 2020

I can barely breathe I can barely breathe //awesome expressive

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Kostas Lagos 19 October 2020

A wonderful poem for the broken hearts

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