Thursday, October 30, 2008

Forsaken Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the sanctity
buried in the heart,
A compassion,
centuries old.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Pooja Ladyluck 11 November 2008

daz da sorrow i was talkin bout.......wid no trace of its origin....still very painful.....though sumtyms.....senseless...strange.....still familiar in its own way....see....m confused......daz exactly da way i wud want to xpress my tht........u xpressed it b'fully......well.......u think better den wat i feel......thanx for expressing the unexpressed[ :) ]! ! !

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Anjali Sinha 06 November 2008

a little sad but nice poem ++++10 regards anju

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Tj Becker 06 November 2008

A sad but amazing write. Many tears are shed in a world of indifference. This is a masterpiece short but very meaningful. A true poetic work of art.

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Reshma Ramesh 04 November 2008

oh! ! beautifulll.....well penned

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Sebastine Humaemo 02 November 2008

nice piece of work....enchanting.....thanks for sharing...

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