Thursday, April 9, 2009

Forrestt And The Clown Comments

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Forrestt Bloomington loved to talk
So bad one time he was pelted with a rock
One day he was walking straight into town
He met a half frowning pink hippie clown
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Kilee Burton
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Alyssa Long 21 April 2009

Ha! Cute little story! It's funny thinking where some ideas come from, like eating the charbroiled franks... haha

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Elizabeth Middleton 13 April 2009

Very clever and whitty :) Check your grammar, adding a few commas is not a bad thing, the ideas run into eachother on some of the lines ;)

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