Formation Comments

Flapping their wings in rhythm - they fly. They show us the way how we should work together. Beautifully described in a lovely poem.

A thoughtful write. A man filled with pride stood hollow in ground while the birds flew singing peaceful songs. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

The formation of birds under the sky is most beautiful, thank you sir.

Yes, it is amazing how these birds make such perfect formation in the sky! It is a great wonder and a beauty to behold! Man the supreme being with greater intelligence struggles sometimes to balance himself on the flat ground. The sense of direction these birds exhibit can put man to shame! I too have often been awed by such instinctive behavior of the animals and birds, but was never in a position to express my thoughts in such an arresting manner as you have done! Top marks!

I always stop, look and listen as migratory fowl pass. Your poem made me eager to hear and see spring's return trip

A great piece of writing. Nature holds us in awe. To see the symmetry and organization in nature, man is left awestruck. Birds teach us so much. As you mentioned they have a sense of direction and purpose that many of us humans lack. This is a great lesson. The philosophical tone of the poem speaks volumes about your depth n insight. And awesome expression to boot. A super 10.

The mortal me stood in awe On shaky ground below A hyper-tense, diabetic hollow That prided on too much information Yet failed to impart its own organs proper formation - - - - -We are amazed and awed by the beauty and wonders of nature.The poet feels that man's claim as the most intelligent creature of earth is nothing but hollow pride.A magnificent write, thanks for sharing.