Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Forlorn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a corpse left behind
In desert by the caravan
That had to go on
On journey unfinished.
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Jahan Zeb
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Kanav Justa 13 November 2013

, , , this one is so good, , , each stanza is so meaningful, ,

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Yasmin Khan 17 October 2013

A passionate write and deep feelings indeed!

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Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

Forlorn, the very word is like a bell/ to toll me back from thee to my sole self... how right our Keats is! such a thought might never allow you to stay in any (even faint) attempt of the strong refuge of imagination...a deep wistful expression is shared indeed! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 27 September 2013

Poetic tears emerged as images of hurt scenes..good work, very descriptive! _Soul

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Farah Ilyas 26 September 2013

Totally agree what Payal said regarding your poem, always finds wistful desires n unfinished panic conditions in your poem, nostalgic touch enhance ur poem's beauty too. well done. don't stop ur pen, keep penning ;)

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Payal Parande 26 September 2013

you sure know how to put life into your write, i always feel like i am watching it happen you create a piece with beauty of emotion and love...bravo sir

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Gajanan Mishra 25 September 2013

living but without soul, good write, thanks.

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