Forgotten Voice Comments

Dear madam, you have so astutely delineated this poem on the awareness of alcohol. Taking alacohol is a great addiction that an addicted person can't get out from it. easily. A great poem.

This is reality.....well written.

A wonderful poem..............................................10

powerful and meaningful this is amazing poem very good work thanks for sharing

Lovely poem, cautioning with the consequences.... very well written

Hazel this poem is true to life and the dreadful pit drink can toss people into well done

Wonder...just how many of us have destroyed ourselves travelling down this path. Very succinctly expressed.

Poetry works wonders if used purposefully! ! ! from the first till the last line...an interesting and thought-provoking write! ! !

No hungry lens wants to get near her and zoom, She is a forgotten voice in the city's slick boom. a soulful write

A Beautiful warning...Alcohol addictions is really pathetic conditions where all are suffering due to its worst side affects..Beautifully expressed. Loved reading it..

They rejoice while drinking But repent not when sober and The tale continues.... A good write of warning by Hazel an all seeing bard of these times!

I do hope she can find the key to life.'s front room. I fabulous title and a superb write Hazel. Alcohol is far too easy to get, cheap and advertised more than anything else and I love a glass of read most nights because it is there. Mmm!

Alcoholic addiction can deprive one of the innate dignity and elan! ! The plight of this one time cynosure of everyone's eye is stunningly brought out through striking images! ! A grave warning! !