Monday, May 28, 2018

Forgotten Unforgotten Comments

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We don't remember those extra ordinary men
In fact we have forgotten those unforgotten
They lead us in the struggle of independence
And when we got it they were forgotten.
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Akhtar Jawad
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A brilliant poem that bites on hypocrisy. Liked the fourth stanza. A powerful write for the men who sacrificed their lives for the country.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 May 2018

JUST so beautifully PENNED as usual EXCEPTIONAL friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

A thought provoking piece of work! Appreciated the way you have abstracted the theme! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Perdita Young 29 May 2018

Very impressive poem about the differences between the hypocrites and truly great, a cruel social reality. Every line is a quotable line worth sharing.10++++++Perdita

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Valsa George 29 May 2018

Unfortunately those great men who shed their blood and got killed to protect our nation and safeguard our freedom are sadly and cruelly forgotten! We live in a world of ingratitude! A powerful write!

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Mj Lemon 28 May 2018

Social commentary with great vision....a great work, Akhtar.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2018

I am proud to call you friend.

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Susan Williams 28 May 2018

An extraordinary intelligent examination of what is, sad to say, the prevalent attitudes in many countries.

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Rini shibu 28 May 2018

If any color we see if any aroma we feel still It's coming from the tombs..Great poem

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