Friday, December 23, 2011

Forgotten Sea Comments

Rating: 4.7

Have you ever felt cast away a nameless wave on a forgotten sea?
Did you think you could hold on against a never relenting wind?
Do you find yourself caught between what could have been and used to be?
Did you really think you were right, life is sweet until the bitter end.
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Ben Burger 20 January 2012

Valueing yourself and trying to figure out what you could of been worth is a commen look back when asscesing future reflections. The poem is soild and has good meaning to it.

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(De Va) 10 January 2012

Do you find yourself caught between what could have been and used to be? ....I find myself here every day.....but I know I am never alone, as there are so many of us lost in this place...haha...blessings...

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Silentpoet Grl 30 December 2011

Very thought provoking - with many strong lines that stood out to me - and felt like I could relate to - great job!

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