Forgotten Peace Comments

A worthwhile wish. I share your frustration about achieving peace. It does not just happen but requires a lot of continuous effort on the part of many other people. Your choice of images is fresh and enlightening.

very well written dear...

Yeah, you'll find one someday.. This is a good poem too.. Great job..

Great well written piece.....thank you

Hmmm... beautifulll...! ! ! Always in beautiful word... The forgotten peace... but now someone already in you side right? Christmas almost come, prepare to date with someone that you loved, Min Sia, Hahahahaahaa...! ! ! Your beloved friend, Naru Kaede,

that's a great wish...you are not alone on your walk searching, Min...HE is with you; with every good hearted being since that Friday night...beautiful poem...talking its heart out...10

A lovely piece Min, regards Tom

It was a lovely Friday night Where I find this journey through the blissful light Wish there's someone on my side Somebody to walk on all might. a lovely friday night and somebody beside to get that bliss if not then oh wat a miss nice poem anjali +10

Very nice piece. especially the last two stanzas were very good. well written with all necesssary words and tone.

Elusive search of peace in life's tortuous journey moving amidst shifting sceneries Where is my eternal companion where is my peace where is my bliss. Good Work........