Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Monday, September 30, 2013

~ Forgotten Old Cabin Comments

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~ Forgotten Old Cabin

A forgotten old cabin at sunset,
Whose chinks have loosened and fell,
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2016

Only a few Miles away! Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 15 December 2013

this is beautiful adeline, , ,

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Paul Brookes 20 November 2013

A beautiful and evocative poem BB : O)

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Roseann Shawiak 21 October 2013

Adeline maybe the cabin has no memories, but you gave it a place in your poetical memory. Beautiful write, love it. The cabin has given you feelings, hopes and no remorse as you look back upon it each time you read these words. You put your heart into the telling of it's story. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Noreen Carden 20 October 2013

Wonderful poem Adeline loved it.You paint a lovely picture with your words

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Smoky Hoss 16 October 2013

Ah yes, I love it, for the setting, the essence and the memories. Beautiful poem Adeline.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 October 2013

But it’s just a forgotten old cabin, No feelings, no hopes no remorse. Beautiful!

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Andrew Blakemore 05 October 2013

A lovely and very descriptive write

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Lorraine Colon 30 September 2013

What stories old buildings could tell. Very nice poem.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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