Your beauty had me breathless
The first time we laid eyes on each other
You had an effect on me
I felt weak when staring at your emerald pools
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emotions deep well expressed...good flow of words...well written poem, Lin...i give you 10
We have all had these moments, but they are rarely so well expressed, and for someone whose first language is clearly not English, a great achievement.
Life consists of forgotten moments and moments we will soon be forgetting..... very good poem