Saturday, December 13, 2008

Forgotten Moments Comments

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Your beauty had me breathless
The first time we laid eyes on each other
You had an effect on me
I felt weak when staring at your emerald pools
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Angelica G 18 April 2009

Life consists of forgotten moments and moments we will soon be forgetting..... very good poem

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Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

emotions deep well expressed...good flow of words...well written poem, Lin...i give you 10

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Paul Hansford 13 December 2008

We have all had these moments, but they are rarely so well expressed, and for someone whose first language is clearly not English, a great achievement.

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Lin Kah Mun

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