Thursday, July 10, 2008

Forgotten Lover Comments

Rating: 4.6

You should recognize
that a lover here lies
he says he wasn`t killed
that`s the truth he denies
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Tareq Jalabi
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Ken E Hall 07 February 2010

Unique way to attack with words the situation you depict in your poem which has happened worldwide no doubt written with finess++++10

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Fatima Shahzad 26 May 2009

maann..awesum! ! ! >.....thts all i can..say! ! >.........i jus luvv ...

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Miral El Nahry 10 January 2009

That was amazing, and full of deep emotion.& by the way, you thought im studying english literature =], im still in prep stage @ skool. 10! !

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

Beutifully written I enjoy readind it!

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 December 2008

full of emotions....i feel the pain....written from heart that's full of love inspite of the heartaches that love have caused...very touching...! 0+++

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Arwen Lee CW 20 November 2008

When the love fades away and promises are broken Don't trap yourself in dismay and keep yourself from heaven What done is done, what gone is gone Wipe off the tears, time will heal your wound....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Beautiful sad poem on love. Love and add 10.

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Cordell Rich 02 September 2008

I enjoyed this poem. I think a lot of people have been where this poem is from.

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

so sad but lovely...awesome

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Pied Piper Berry 08 August 2008

Your poem flowed beautifully. It is very sad. Nice job.

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Wadeema Ali 30 July 2008

very very nice every body have 2 feel pain if they had loved some one and been chated i felt ur feeling..... gud jop

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Priyanka Shetty 23 July 2008

the title should have been the unforgettable forgotten lover.....

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Priyanka Shetty 23 July 2008

a poetry i can relate to........ i'm short of words for your work... keep writing....

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'...sold your love/to the first who buys'. This line says so much. Bittersweet. t x

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 11 July 2008

oh love how difficult you are.unfortunately you won't see love without a lie.it is too far......strong emotions this poem have.. i like it too much..

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Serenity Prayer 10 July 2008

so sad, but well written. good job.

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Rema Prasanna 10 July 2008

feelings of a frustrated lover expressed very well in this.. pain and lost emotions in those lines I can find.. good write... Rema

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Melissa Hurst 10 July 2008

Very sad and beautiful.

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