As love improves man's humanity
Crime fosters his insanity
As we need humanity to survive
As the love is dead, we may die
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Absolutely 10 from me, and absolutely a great collaboration work, i loved it..so meaningful and have a deep message to be heard and to remind self...We nowadays focus on our life and sometimes lack of what we should have for others, LOVE...we should love people and help people as it always great if we can change someone back to real life meaning, life is not just for us only..individually but life is beyond that..it bigger and life is where all live the life as whole, because everyone has a diamond in heart, to share with everybody...if we really see where we are now...i afraid we too ego to admit that we still lack of humanity, kudos for u both..loved it_Soul
thank you Ellias. this work is really awesome.the idea belongs to you.and you lit the idea in my mind that down the main street in the poverties how can people keep the humanity and how can they act according to their heart not diong crime and do nothing to do with drugs.or is it possible to keep the light of humanity on in those condition? if you ask me dear Ellias it is possible although it is too hard.or we must keep trying.in those condition they have to fight for the life so how can they keep humanity.the guys have to put all the rules beneath their feet. If you ask me Ellias i will say the humanity is nothing to do with religions.we can live without religions but we can not live without humanity and we will die. but i believe that poetry will save the humanity. any way the lines you have added are supperb.yes our wonderful lovely world one day may become unique world. Godbless you~nb