Monday, April 3, 2017

Forgotten Dreams Comments

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The house stands open
to the weather.
Walls cracked;
roof collapsing
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Garry Rowlands
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Chinedu Dike 03 April 2017

An awful sight of decrepitude is aptly captured in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Garry and welcome to Poemhunter. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Garry Rowlands 03 April 2017

Is it better to have them and fail or to have lower expectations and meet them?

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Make Shift 03 April 2017

I guess we all have dreams that end up rotting. Good one.

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