Forgotten Dreams Poem by Garry Rowlands

Forgotten Dreams

Rating: 5.0


The house stands open
to the weather.
Walls cracked;
roof collapsing
A mildewed teddy bear moulders
in the crumbling fireplace.
Woodwormed floorboards;
rotting stairs.
Glass in the windows shattered
like broken dreams
And everywhere the sour smell
of decay and lost ambition.

Monday, April 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,loss,reflecting,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 April 2017

An awful sight of decrepitude is aptly captured in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Garry and welcome to Poemhunter. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Garry Rowlands 03 April 2017

Is it better to have them and fail or to have lower expectations and meet them?

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Make Shift 03 April 2017

I guess we all have dreams that end up rotting. Good one.

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