Forgotten Accommodation Comments

A wonderfully descriptive piece and the couplet form makes it flow effortlessly. Great write, Andrew x

There is something rather melancholy about this beautifully penned description of another time. Your images are touched with impressionist light and the mouse brings a smile of recognition to the reader, as s/he shares your feeling of relief as you close the door on your 'forgotten accommodation'. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I have been in old places such as these and the feeling can be quite strange, like time had been suspended in someway, Brilliantly writen, I almost felt as if I was there looking around at all the different sights Love duncan X

Beautifully flowing and evocative, most enjoyable Love from David

This sort of situation is somehow always rather tragic... you've encapsulated it marvellously. t x

A lovely read. -shannon