Monday, November 16, 2009
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Crying out in fear,
When no one can hear,
My final breaths
Will be my death.
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Aly Reiss
16 November 2009
I love this writing! It speaks to me because I really understand where you're coming from. Good poem!
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7/23/2025 3:48:32 PM # 1.0.0
Admittedly depressing, but you show that you know a bit about poetic structure and some higher level wording. I'd recommend watching out for the syllable count of each line you put down. Syllables hold the flow of a rhyme scheme together. Otherwise, bravo.