Thursday, October 8, 2009

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My stars are vanished
since dark clouds has rised
my life blew away like smoke
without trace, in the sky
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Asif Baloch
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Chitra - 26 December 2009

poignant write, soul-stirring!

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

still hope lurks for my future, that I might see a glimpse of sunlight Rachel Ann Butler

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Akram Saqib 10 October 2009

pessimistic thoughts deftly woven in words

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Joseph Poewhit 08 October 2009

Look at the other side of the coin - for good

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Seema Chowdhury 08 October 2009

hi Asif, once aqgain it is a beautiful poem but its filled with lots of pain. don't give up. just open your heart and look around and see how beautiful life is. see some of my new poems Dwell in my soul pg1 Watch the magic happen pg3

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