Friday, August 14, 2009

Forgotten Comments

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I think I've been forgotten
Everyday of my life
I think I've been forgotten
And crying tears of strife
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luisa sanchez
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 November 2009

Sometimes in life you do feel like this but despite all loneliness the world is still full of many people, places and events to remember.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 September 2009

Sometime such feelings do come when none cares for us and we feel left alone. Well said.

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Ted M 21 August 2009

Sometimes you are forgotten, but when you use that time to build yourself and come out strong, you will be remembered and more so, cause this is someone they will definitely do not want to forget.........Well written, , , , , , , , , ,

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

Such a saddening piece Luisa...To feel so alone..can be like a prison sentence in life....I loved the emotion in this piece...very tenderly spoken gives the poem a real sense of loneliness...well done my friend 10++ for expression

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