Thursday, February 2, 2012

Forgotten Comments

Rating: 5.0

Torn in half, I spit into the wind
Fully aware of the consequence,
The saliva slapping my cheek
Displacing mascara polluted tears
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Faustina Marie
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Rajendran Muthiah 15 May 2012

'My tears are proud to tell them what they have done? ' 2. I simply drown...forgotten'. Wonderful lines like these walk into our minds at once. Loads and Loads of sorrow they convey. Rated *****. Revenge is a kind of wild justice-Bacon. You are a Karate practitioner. Your mastery of martial arts should not be carried away by your vengeful ire. Let your poetic nature sparkle in sweet lines.

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Faustina Marie

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