Saturday, June 25, 2011

Forgoten ... Sisterhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

the feeling is sad to think about
we use to be together unseperable now never together
we have forgoten the times of happyness we had together
how we use to laugh so hard we cried for hours
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Lisa Bray
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Kee Thampi 27 June 2011

a new sky will link together this dreams now its nothing you never come around and i could care less of it sometimes i miss the old times when we could laugh together

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

I really loved the way you described the whole thing. Great poem rich in imagery and style. Rate 10 for your skilful writing. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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Lisa Bray

Lisa Bray

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