Hitting life's golf holes,
Struggling to score vague goals,
Forgot, he'd a soul.
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Score, core, ore! Struggling along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Score, core, ore! Yes, yes, and deeper still there lies one's soul. But a look within seems harder. Thank you Edward Louis.
life has golf hole! // outstanding thought
I must thank you Mahtab Bangalee, you have really taken trouble to read many of my poems and, what is important, give feedback.