Monday, November 18, 2013

Forgiving God Comments

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Day One.
On the first day I forgave God,
I was happy.
Lying in my bed, I said,
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Shania K. Younce 26 August 2014

I do not agree with the Good Lord is dead part. However, I really enjoy reading the poem. It has a nice flow. Bien!

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Noreen Carden 15 January 2014

Hello Paddy a very interesting poem really well written a very enjoyable read i hope its not true because we are in real trouble but apart from whether i agree with the views expressed its a wonderful poem so well done to you

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