Friday, October 18, 2013

Forgiving Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot forgive.
I cannot be as the maple tree,
The one they all but cut down
Yet somehow sprang green again.
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Susy Evelyne
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Charity Nduhiu 30 June 2014

Yes you can so that you can have a peace of mind. Nice poem

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Stephen Katona 19 June 2014

This is a well written poem. I would love to read a version where the 'cannot's become 'can's.

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Heather Wilkins 01 November 2013

sometimes forgiving is difficult but in time it can happen. Better to forgive laugh it off and move on. lovely write

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John Brown 29 October 2013

Of course you can Susy - it's within us all - it just takes a little time to develop the ability.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 October 2013

'Yet I cannot forgive - can I? ' Of course, you can! Just give it a try! A well written poem,10/10!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 October 2013

such a beautiful poem, we find it so hard to forgive!

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Susy Evelyne

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