Monday, January 28, 2019

Forgiveness = Beatitude Comments

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If forgiveness were an object,
it would be the smooth edge
of a melting ice cube.
It would be the centermost petals
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Nika McGuin
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tom billsborough 29 January 2019

where burning rage meets its end... beautifully written, Nika. The image of the dandelion seeds expresses the feeling very well. A classy poem indeed.

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Bill Cantrell 28 January 2019

Very good poem, to those of us who truly want it...forgiveness I’d indeed a most precious gift, I truly enjoyed this wonderful poem

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Nika McGuin

Nika McGuin

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