Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stay with me I beg to thee
My way were dark help me p
Brighten up and be the light
From my mistakes tow me up.
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Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan
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Blue Eyes 23 November 2009

although i loved the poem and its theme very much however there are few mistakes that one must point out.i mean, they are not important at all and might be typos anyway, i beg thee, mistake.great piece of work.keep up the great work.

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Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan

Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan

Angono, Rizal, Philippines
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