Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your back is turned to me
and I try to imagine the lines
of your mouth…
whether they are set in determination
...
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YURI DURAAN
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 21 March 2008

Good one Yuri.............

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 March 2008

a voluptous poetry..................so delicious to read........

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Dislocated Heart 15 March 2008

hm.. this is really a beautiful piece. i enjoy reading this.

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Coreena Dejesus 15 March 2008

Awww i wanted to cry when reading this, this is truly beautiful!

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C.R. Clark 15 March 2008

This is really a beautiful write. You paint such a wonderful picture of a willingness to forgive one who is truly regretful. Thanks, best wishes Richard

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Hali Curtis 14 March 2008

Aww I like this alot....*smiles*

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 March 2008

passion when blazed by the flames within yet not broken by the forgiveness...............wonderful write with eloquence,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Coach Roth 14 March 2008

Wow...so beautiful and so tender, and much more forgiving than I am capable of...nicely done...Coach

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Scott Austin 11 March 2008

This is a beautiful piece of work you have written, thank you for sharing it with us. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday. Scott

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

South Africa
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