Tuesday, May 19, 2015

Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 0.0

forgive me
for my broken heart
my parched lips
and my dusty hair
...
Read full text

Rafique Farooqi
COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 May 2015

Wow this is excellently expressed in great poetic literary figurative way! I like the line of the evening sun metaphor. I think this is of your masterpieces. Long may u write sir.

1 0 Reply
Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
Close
Error Success