Monday, January 5, 2015

Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 4.8

It is the sweetness which sheds off the shadows of severe anguishes
It is the mysterious melody mesmerizing the million minds like meditation
It is the ointment which heals every injury
Its none other but FORGIVENESS
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Nishi Kumari
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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2016

Forgiveness makes one sublime. It is a strength and not a weakness. Thanks for sharing it on PH. It is the ointment which heals every injury It is the overflowing love innocent as that of a child's heart Its none other but FORGIVENESS

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Nishi Kumari 22 October 2016

Thank you for your views and comments...

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Nishi Kumari 22 October 2016

Thank you for your views and comments...glad you liked my writing...

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Ayushi Verma 19 January 2015

I like the ending very much. The line its an ointment... is correctly said. The poem has a note which can inspire others

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 08 January 2015

Blessed are those who are forgiven Rest are the roamers with a weary soul... Beautifully done poem on Forgiveness.Well expressed.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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