Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Forgiveness Comments

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I can't do it anymore
I have nothing left to give.
I am tired of it all
I have nothing left for to live.
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Rik Bertrand
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 29 February 2012

The poem is very sad but it speaks eloquently of how most of us feel sometimes, and that makes the poem relevant to a reader. I read it as a reader and not as a writer, and it does touch the human side of us all. The resolute last lines redeem the hopelessness conveyed in the first few lines, leaving a message of challenge...of trying again.

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