Friday, October 14, 2011

Forgiveness Comments

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Sometimes I feel like screaming,
'I am sorry! '
but I'm too afraid
there will be no-one
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

Dingdong dingdong bell! Listen to Jacqui singing a hymn of rhyme to god of heaven. By George God is pleased simple as I'm pleased. Hope he supplies you ray - Hope god supplies mirth on the earth. 'seventy times seven. Please supply a ray of light' You poems are warm - simple I say you have charm - Simple! Simple! Simple Jacqui heart is Indian Temple as her poem is sample - an ample proof! Hey! Hey! he! he! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :) :) count the smiles catch the life take it home - free of cost from your Indian Solo man!

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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 October 2011

this is what i ask for everyday.........forgiveness

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Dave Walker 15 October 2011

Really really like this, a really fantastic poem. Great write.

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Crimson Love 15 October 2011

I hope you find that ray of sunshine, no one is more deserving than you :) Beautiful poem! :)

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