Forgiven (Haiku) Comments

A brilliant write with its simplicity. A meaningful message. So very true.10+++

Yes! ! ! You conquered the inherent brevity of a Haiku and made it deliver a tome of wisdom in a wry but reverential way. 10+++++++++++

You have hit the nail on the head....... Without verbosity, you have eloquently brought out the essence of God's boundless love.......! Call this a Senryu, not a Haiku!

The spirit of forgiveness is indeed divine. We mortals can always count on God's limitless benevolence. Well said.

Definitely no contest there, not ever! You have touched upon the truth of goodness in this poem, meaningful and energizing in it's essence. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Absolutely. 100% true. His righteousness is greater than my sins. Wonderful.

Great poem, Howard. Thank you.

Wow witty and thought provoking n true. Fantastic haiku.

Very deep and emerging thoughts.

We must forgive ourselves in order to be totally forgiven

A meaningful Haiku nicely and aptly presented. Well done, thanks.

This is certainly powerful. But How can we really forgive those who are evil. What are these people? They have no love in there heart.

Powerful message in this wonderful write!

Your forgiven Sir Howard :)

Now, If only we could convince demon terror groups such as Isis and hellbound leaders such as Li'l Kim and Putin to heed your words of truth...Perhaps we could promise our children a better worls coming soon...Good Write, Howard...~FjR~