Wednesday, May 27, 2015

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For far to long it all seemed so much effort
And the way the years flew by increased the pain
The way I felt, I thought that we had lost it
And maybe we would not be friends again
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Phil Soar
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 May 2015

For far too long! Nice work.

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Grace Burke 27 May 2015

Very moving poem. It flowed beautifully

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