Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Forgiven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wounded by one’s kiss,
And broken by one’s lie,
A worry of what I’ll miss,
I fear of not being that guy,
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Dustin Burel
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Dustin Burel

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Macon, Georgia
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