Wednesday, June 12, 2019

Forgive Us Our Dragons Comments

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Our nuptial vows did fatally succumb
To the dragons' fires. Though our grave feathers
Came to ashes, in phoenix we shall plumb
The depths of chaos for hoarded treasures.
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David Grzan
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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2019

A poignant and impressive write that resonates with the soul. I feel inspired by your style of writing, your use of language is awesome. A masterly creation. Thanks for sharing, David.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 June 2019

such a nice write, David. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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David Grzan 13 June 2019

Thank you Jazib. Your poem and should be required reading for all those coming of age.

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Brian Taylor 12 June 2019

Nice poem! The poem delivers a positive message.

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David Grzan 13 June 2019

Much appreciated. Thank you. (Note: the link to your name is not responding, curious.)

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