Friday, October 20, 2006

Forgive The Little Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

forgive the little things
that hold no consequence
like the
cold feet
...
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Ben Partenay
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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 24 September 2007

wow wonderful poem with lots of emotions.

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jennifer hall 27 February 2007

This is absolutly beautiful.....great poem

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Ernestine Northover 20 October 2006

This is absolutely beautiful Ben, I adored the last two lines, they finished the poem so well. A delightful read, a real pleasure to find it. But then I always enjoy your writes they are so good. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX This is going to my favourites list. A big 10 from me too.

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